

ගොඩක් ලස්සනයි යාළුවා... ලස්සන වචන ටිකක් ලස්සනට ගලපල තියෙනව...
What a nice poem this is...?
The way it's flown..I like it Joel bro..
Good work...
The night would keep on passing slowly,
Silence overwhelmed the room,
But we were hollow within ourselves,
Red burning charcoal would have shown new dreams,
But we would have dug the ashes of the past
as always i will repeat you are the master of words
and i have lots to learn from you in this writing field....
nice poem Joel
nice poem. with a nice bunch of words together, makes a wonderful creation.
really...
she is creating an unspoken literature....
nice work
just superb.. it's like a song; it remed.. Red Red Wine song to me..
really u are doing a gre8 pc of works bro..wish u all da best!!
This gives me a sensationally great image of affection.
you are born with a superb talent to write numerous creations bilingually.
It reminds me of the Shakespeare literature while I am reading your poem.
Superb work..keep up your good work bro...