~ Spinster ~

j2l

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Doly

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The night would keep on passing slowly,
Silence overwhelmed the room,
But we were hollow within ourselves,
Red burning charcoal would have shown new dreams,
But we would have dug the ashes of the past:)

:P

as always i will repeat you are the master of words
and i have lots to learn from you in this writing field....
nice poem Joel
 

j2l

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The night would keep on passing slowly,
Silence overwhelmed the room,
But we were hollow within ourselves,
Red burning charcoal would have shown new dreams,
But we would have dug the ashes of the past:)

:P

as always i will repeat you are the master of words
and i have lots to learn from you in this writing field....
nice poem Joel

thanks minu nanga..... appreciate your encouraging words...
 
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just superb.. it's like a song; it remed.. Red Red Wine song to me..
really u are doing a gre8 pc of works bro..wish u all da best!!
 

ronsilva

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This gives me a sensationally great image of affection.

you are born with a superb talent to write numerous creations bilingually.

It reminds me of the Shakespeare literature while I am reading your poem.

Superb work..keep up your good work bro...
 

j2l

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This gives me a sensationally great image of affection.

you are born with a superb talent to write numerous creations bilingually.

It reminds me of the Shakespeare literature while I am reading your poem.

Superb work..keep up your good work bro...

thanks ron aiyya... thanks for your appreciation.. its really encouraging .