Surathal Pathuma

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[twisted]

lassanai ...

 

[coolkasun]

Nice Creation..........

 

[nwnbs]

ගොඩක් ලස්සනයි...

 

[ronsilva]

මාතෘ ප්‍රේමය....ලොව උතුම්ම ආදරය..කිසිදා නොවියැලෙන සෙනෙහස...

තවත් අපුරු පද ගෙතුමක්... එලිසමය.. කාව්‍යය විරිත....කාව්‍යමය උපමා හා සංකල්ප පරිහරනය කරමින් ඔබ පෙන්වනා කුසලතා ඉතා අගෙයි...

ඔබ මා දුටු දක්ෂ කිවිඳියෙකි....

ඔබේ සිතුම් පැතුම් සියල්ලත් කවියක් මෙනි..

මා එසේ පවසන්නේ මා ඔබව හඳුනා ඇති බැවිනි...

නංගිට තව තවත් සුන්දර කවි පද වැල්වලින් ගෙතු ලස්සන කවි ගෙත්තම් වලින් මේ පියස සරසන්නට ශක්තිය හා වාසනාව ලැබේවා!!

ඔබට ජය!!

 

[Kasmadumala]

sarthak amau padaviye uththarethwaya u mau sennehasa uddipanaya wana apurwa nirmanayak........
hadawathata denena..nirmanayak.......
godak lasanai.

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

kavi suwada danuna.. lassanai sis.. keep it up!

 

[Doly]

Sorryyyyy
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[Hayao]

Sorryyyyy
can not view this poem

Me too

 

[Himali Renu]

Me too

same 4 me

 

[Hayao]

same 4 me

Is it??

 

[NoWayOut]

Meeta kalin kavi wala wagema... obage nirmana hakiyawa, basa hasiraweema, saha wachana danuma ithama pulul. Aththatama EK me nisades saha kaavya piyase kavi walin lassanama kaavyaathmaka wachana bhawaitha karanne oba baway mage adahasa... e wagema ... kaviye arthaya rakagena wachana walin pelahara paannath obata thiyenne apuru hakiyawak... "sath", "neth", "sith" yana wachana e e kaviye hama padhayatama mulata yodhagena arthaya arakshawena akarayen nirmanayak karanna bohoma apahasuy.

kaviye wiritha, eliweta elisamaya reka ganeema ithama honday.. namuth kaviya yamkisi ekakaaree saha kalin sithaa gatha haki (predictable), gathiyak labena bawa mata hithenawa me kramaya nisa... kaviye mulikama reethin araksha kireema awashyay (eg: wiritha), namuth wachana thulama sira unoth eken nirmanayata yamkisi haniyak wena baway mage hangeema. wacha e akaarayen yodha ganeemth rasayak thibena bawa kiyannama one. namuth kaviyen mathu karannata uthsaha karana arthayata wada pera sandahan kala rasaya mathu wenawa nam, eya kaviyata yam kisi haniyak neda? samahara kavi thiyanawa, wachana, shabdha rasayata mul thanak dunnata kamak nathi.. namuth bilindek pilibanda sonduru sanwedee kavi pelaka e sanwedee kamata wada kaviye shabdha rasaya ismathu weema sudusu nowana baway mage hangeema.

Ithin, mage me digu wiwechanayen oba dhanaathmaka yamak labagaththa nam eyay mage aramuna...

 

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I have reduced the image size and hopefully you will be able to view it now! I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused.

 

[TearDrop]

Meeta kalin kavi wala wagema... obage nirmana hakiyawa, basa hasiraweema, saha wachana danuma ithama pulul. Aththatama EK me nisades saha kaavya piyase kavi walin lassanama kaavyaathmaka wachana bhawaitha karanne oba baway mage adahasa... e wagema ... kaviye arthaya rakagena wachana walin pelahara paannath obata thiyenne apuru hakiyawak... "sath", "neth", "sith" yana wachana e e kaviye hama padhayatama mulata yodhagena arthaya arakshawena akarayen nirmanayak karanna bohoma apahasuy.

kaviye wiritha, eliweta elisamaya reka ganeema ithama honday.. namuth kaviya yamkisi ekakaaree saha kalin sithaa gatha haki (predictable), gathiyak labena bawa mata hithenawa me kramaya nisa... kaviye mulikama reethin araksha kireema awashyay (eg: wiritha), namuth wachana thulama sira unoth eken nirmanayata yamkisi haniyak wena baway mage hangeema. wacha e akaarayen yodha ganeemth rasayak thibena bawa kiyannama one. namuth kaviyen mathu karannata uthsaha karana arthayata wada pera sandahan kala rasaya mathu wenawa nam, eya kaviyata yam kisi haniyak neda? samahara kavi thiyanawa, wachana, shabdha rasayata mul thanak dunnata kamak nathi.. namuth bilindek pilibanda sonduru sanwedee kavi pelaka e sanwedee kamata wada kaviye shabdha rasaya ismathu weema sudusu nowana baway mage hangeema.

Ithin, mage me digu wiwechanayen oba dhanaathmaka yamak labagaththa nam eyay mage aramuna...

obage awanka pasasumath ,pahadili gunados wichaarayath maa madahath sithin piligannawa. Dayaawen, oba penwaadun aduluhudukam idiri nirmaanayan sandahaa mata mahathse upakaari wanawaa noanumaanai..
me watinaa satahana maa wenuwen thabuu obata mage gawrawaneeya sthuthiya...

 

[m3pium]

Harima lassana nirmaanayak akkiyo.....Mawakage uthumma ekama prarthanaya sigithi bilidek......harima lassanata a prarthanaya..... a wagema bilidaga molakati hurathal bawa akkiya kaviyata yodagena......
Suba pathum mage akkiyata.......digu gamanakata.........!!!!

 

[Hiranchandima]

wow harima lassanai

 

[TearDrop]

wow harima lassanai

bohoma sthuthi Hiranchandima..

 

[TearDrop]

Harima lassana nirmaanayak akkiyo.....Mawakage uthumma ekama prarthanaya sigithi bilidek......harima lassanata a prarthanaya..... a wagema bilidaga molakati hurathal bawa akkiya kaviyata yodagena......
Suba pathum mage akkiyata.......digu gamanakata.........!!!!

mage nangindata godaak sthuthi ..mey dayaabara satahana thabuwaata...

 

[TearDrop]

lassanai ...

Bohoma sthuthi twisted!

 

[TearDrop]

sarthak amau padaviye uththarethwaya u mau sennehasa uddipanaya wana apurwa nirmanayak........
hadawathata denena..nirmanayak.......
godak lasanai.

Nirmaanaya rasa windaata godak sathutui..godak sthuthi...