kudos_utopia said:Aha ok now I get it
Hey but in threewheelers in MOratuwa....there r no such things....![]()
wht they have then?
like sudu duwa nadeesha?kudos_utopia said:Aha ok now I get it
Hey but in threewheelers in MOratuwa....there r no such things....![]()
like sudu duwa nadeesha?most probably something to do with Jesus..twisted said:wht they have then?like sudu duwa nadeesha?
truth4L said:I starred at the heavens and saw the darkness
The darkness which has swallowed me, binding me forever
an eternity awaited for that marvel
an Angel to redeem me from this place of torment
lol..yeah i knw it sucks..![]()
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i love christian themes in poetry ..kosandpol said:most probably something to do with Jesus..
thou shalt not covet thy neighbors ass? 
I was thinking of Zeus and Odin when I read this.twisted said:O father, when you look down on me in vain
i know you even cry blood, when it rains
but still at this depth i am enchained
your love and good graces shall be regained
i love christian themes in poetry ..
more like "Jesus is our savior" or "Hail Mary"twisted said:hmm like whatthou shalt not covet thy neighbors ass?
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twisted said:O father, when you look down on me in vain
i know you even cry blood, when it rains
but still at this depth i am enchained
your love and good graces shall be regained
i love christian themes in poetry ..





kosandpol said:I was thinking of Zeus and Odin when I read this.
kosandpol said:more like "Jesus is our savior" or "Hail Mary"
are you christian btw?Odin, king of Valhalla. From the Norse mythology. The god of the vikings.twisted said:zeus was greek and odin was what..scandinavian/pagan?![]()
i was thinking of god and satan.

truth4L said:
WOW..!!!!!!!
itz simply awesome...!!!!
i relly do love ur poetry...
nice work bro...![]()
thank you ..they are not that good. and you should stick to writing too. you have talent..but pls do study about poetry too. i get the feeling that we are actaully writing free verses lol.truth4L said:
WOW..!!!!!!!
itz simply awesome...!!!!
i relly do love ur poetry...
nice work bro...![]()

kosandpol said:Odin, king of Valhalla. From the Norse mythology. The god of the vikings.
And Zeus certainly had enough problems to cry blood..![]()
holy crow. should read more about norse mythoskudos_utopia said:Hmmmm....
If lie4L likes it
ok then Twisted
I also lyk ur poetry
It is more than simply awesome
It is THE POEM![]()
jenny rajapaksha said:Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...it's learning to dance in the rain.

thanks