රෝස කටු - නවකතාව

[twisted]

Tried to read but couldn't get past the first page man ..this is mediocre at best sorry to say that but there's a shit load of poorly written stories that starts in the same manner.. may be im too soon to judge but it's so mediocre that I couldn't even read pass the first page..nothing to keep me interested, it's too common unlike your poems which are usually very well written.
however I wish you best of luck.

 

[cspmaxx]

මේක තුන් ඈදුනු නව කතාවක් වෙයි වගේ
දෙන්නම සෙට් වෙන්න යන්නෙ

 

[cspmaxx]

lassanai digatama liyanna

 

[cspmaxx]

kiyawannako issarahata

haa

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

Tried to read but couldn't get past the first page man ..this is mediocre at best sorry to say that but there's a shit load of poorly written stories that starts in the same manner.. may be im too soon to judge but it's so mediocre that I couldn't even read pass the first page..nothing to keep me interested, it's too common unlike your poems which are usually very well written.
however I wish you best of luck.

im not going to say anything
just read the whole story if u can...

Thanks for the comment

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

මේක තුන් ඈදුනු නව කතාවක් වෙයි වගේ
දෙන්නම සෙට් වෙන්න යන්නෙ

එක බඹරයි මල් දෙකයි වගේද

lassanai digatama liyanna

ඕකේ

haa

 

[amandi3891]

ade nadda mukuthaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

[rcccc]

සංකපාලගෙ මනෝපාර

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

ade nadda mukuthaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

අද කතෘට නිවාඩු ලු

 

[yakshaya]

kiyawanna bayay ban, oka anei da danna ne

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

kiyawanna bayay ban, oka anei da danna ne

 

[gayankuwait]

 

[amandi3891]

අද කතෘට නිවාඩු ලු

 

[chrishanelloyd]

aye me thread ekata mama comment karanne ne ,. bye

 

[Rex921]

BUMP

 

[twisted]

im not going to say anything
just read the whole story if u can...

Thanks for the comment

I didn't wanna offend you..just gave an honest opinion.
I'll sure will bite the bullet the and read it might pay off

 

[chrishanelloyd]

I didn't wanna offend you..just gave an honest opinion.
I'll sure will bite the bullet the and read it might pay off

bite the bullet තුවක්කු උන්ඩ හපන්න හදනවද කතාවක් කියවන්න ඕන හින්ද

 

[^Night Fury^]

I didn't wanna offend you..just gave an honest opinion.
I'll sure will bite the bullet the and read it might pay off

පට්ට ඉංග්‍රීසි ​

 

[chrishanelloyd]

පට්ට ඉංග්‍රීසි ​

වචනයක් වැරදුනාම කියවන්න එනවා

 

[chucks]

bite the bullet තුවක්කු උන්ඩ හපන්න හදනවද කතාවක් කියවන්න ඕන හින්ද