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Mahagedara (SL OLD Hits songs thread ) mage sahodara sahodariyanta, tika kalakata pera thilina kala mema kawi nirmaanaya ,Nisadas saha Kaavya piyasatath thilina karanna mata hithuna...
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    ලස්සනයි. ඔබ එලිසමය රකිමින් කවි නිර්මාණය කරන ආකාරය හරිම අපූරුයි..
     

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    නං‍ගි‍ගෙ‍ මේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍න‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍නක‍ර‍නයේ‍ අ‍ත්‍ පො‍ත්‍ තැ‍බූ‍ ප‍ල‍මු‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍න‍ය‍....

    එ‍දා‍ අ‍පි‍ හැ‍ම දෙ‍නා‍ගේ‍ම‍ සි‍තු‍වි‍ලි‍ බ‍ණ දේ‍ශණා‍ව‍කි‍න්‍ ප‍හ‍න්‍ ක‍ර‍නවා‍ සේ‍ ශා‍න්‍ත‍ හැ‍ඟී‍ම‍ක්‍ අ‍පේ‍ හූ‍යේ‍(SL OLD HIT SONGS ADD HERE) හැ‍ම දෙ‍නා‍ටම එ‍කා‍ව‍න්‍ව දැ‍නී‍ අ‍ප‍ ඒ‍ ගැ‍න වැ‍ඩි‍ වැ‍ඩි‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍ථා‍ ක‍ර‍න්නට පෙ‍ල‍ඹු‍නා‍ කී‍වො‍ත්‍ මා‍ නි‍වැ‍ර‍දි‍යි‍...

    එ‍ලි‍ස‍ම‍ය‍ රැ‍ක ග‍නි‍මි‍න්‍ කා‍ව්‍ය‍ක‍ර‍න‍යේ‍ යෙ‍දෙ‍න‍ එ‍ක‍ සු‍ළු‍ ප‍ටු‍ අ‍භ‍්‍යා‍ස‍ය‍ක්‍ නො‍වෙ‍න‍ බ‍ව‍ මා‍ හො‍ඳා‍කා‍ර‍ව‍ම‍ ද‍න්නා‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍..එ‍ව‍න්‍ බැ‍රැ‍රු‍ම්‍ ක‍ර්ත‍ව්‍යය‍ක්‍ මෙ‍ලෙ‍ස‍ සු‍ග‍ම‍ව අ‍ප‍ට‍ ර‍ස‍ ක‍ල‍තා‍ බෙ‍දා‍ දෙ‍න‍වා‍ කි‍ය‍න්නෙ‍ ඔ‍බේ‍ කු‍ස‍ල‍තා‍ව‍ය‍ම‍ මි‍ස‍ අ‍න්‍ ක‍ව‍ර‍ක්‍ද‍??

    නං‍ගි‍යා‍ එ‍ලි‍ පෙ‍හෙ‍ලි‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍ත්‍ ජ‍ය‍ මා‍ව‍තේ‍ නො‍නැ‍ව‍තී‍ ඉ‍දි‍රි‍ය‍ට‍ම‍ ය‍න්න.

    ඔ‍බ‍ ආ‍ප‍සු‍ හැ‍රී‍ බ‍ල‍න හැ‍ම මො‍හො‍ත‍ක‍ම‍ අ‍ප‍ ඔ‍බ‍ ප‍සු‍ප‍ස සි‍ටි‍නා‍ බ‍ව‍ අ‍ම‍ත‍ක‍ ක‍ර‍න්න එ‍පා‍.. .

    ඔ‍බ‍ට‍ ජ‍ය‍!!
     
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    Me kaviya godak mahansiwela liyala thiyana bawa penawa. me kale godak aya liyanne nisades, eka kavi liyanawata wada pahasuy ne. mama nisades narakay kiyanawa neme, kavi liyanna eeta wada danumak awabodayak awashyay.

    Kaviye mathraa, eliweta elisamaya gana godak mahansiwela thiyanawa. palaweni kaviya gaththoth eke "Pinbara", "Wilthala", "Nilketa", "Nimnada" yana wachanath eeta passe ena "Dine", "Dile", "Diye", "Dige" yana wachanath lassanata galapala thiyanawa. Kaviye sampurna arthaya rakena widihata mewa yodana eka harima amaru wadak. anika kavyamaya gathiyath reka ganna one. e wagema "manawan", "ratawan", "amawan", "(ran)ganawan" yana wachana pawichchi karala elisamaya lassanata araksha karala thiyanawa. mama palaweni eka udaharaneta gaththata anith hama kawiyakamath me lakshana thiyanawa. oba kochchara palapurudu kavikariyakda kiyala mama danne ne, namuth meka baluwahama penne bohoma danum therum athi palapurudu kivindiyak kiyala. kaviye reethi hama deyakma wage sampurna karala thiyanawa. aththatama kiyanawa e pilibandawa katha karanna mata obata tharam sudusukam ne kiyala kaviya dakkahama mata hithuna. e nisa mama arthaya gana tikak kiyannam.

    kaviye arthaya gaththoth, ithama sundara pathumak. pem sambandatha kshanikawa athiwena nathiwena ada kale, kapsuwahas kalak pawathina pem damak athi wenna kiyala prarthana karana eka harima sundaray, kalochithay kiyala mata hithune. meka bolanda pem pathumak neme kiyala patakayata hangenawa. "sanwara sithata", yedumen pahadili wenawa meka bolanda, kshanika pem pathumak neme kiyala. sanwara sithak illana premayath sanwara ekak wenna onene. e wagema mama me kaviye mama kamathima padhaya thamay "nanwara sasara muna gasuman hangeeyan" kiyana padhaya. e kiyanne pera athmabhawayan ge indala ekata siti dennek ge ekweema thamay prarthanaya. e padhaya yodala thiyana hatiyata mama godak kamathiy. anika eke "na' shabdayen ena anuprasa rasayakuth thiyanawa. e padhaya kiyawanakota harima sundara hangeemak athi wenawa, thaman kenekuta adaraya karanna patan gaththata passe, e adaraya hondata dalulannata gaththata passe athiwena sundara balawath bandeemath ekka apita hithenawa e kena apith ekka pasugiya athma waladith ekata inna athi kiyala.

    dan mama hadanne mata pena widihata sulu waraddak pennanna. "rana thisariyata rana thisarun labeeyan", meke thisarun kiyala bahuwachanayen yedee thiyana eka sudusu ne kiyalay mata hithune. kalin pada wala ena wachana wala anukulawa wenna athi thisarun kiyala yeduwe. habay mehema ekakuth thiyanawa, thisarun hama witama bahu wachana neme. dan bilindun, dewindun, surindun, wage yedum eka wachanay ne. api nishchitha deyak kenek gana katha karanawa nam, eka wachanarthayek ehema yodanna puluwan. meke "rana thisariyata" kiyala nishchitha thisariyak gana katha karana nisa thisarun kiyana eka nishchitha ekawachanarthayen ganna puluwan kiyala hithenawa. habay mata e gana loku danumak nam ne. obata upadesak ganna kenek innawa nam ahala balanna puluwan.

    ithin awasana washayen, me nirmanaya ithama lassana sarthaka nirmanayak kiyala mata hithenne. ada kalaye hatiyata ithama usas kaviyak kiyalay mage hangeema. kaviye gunathmakabhawayath, rasayath dekama gana godak salakili mathwela thiyanawa. Mathu nirmana sandaha me kuda satahana diriyakma wewa kiyala pathanawa.
     

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    ලස්සනයි සහෝදරී ඔබේ නිර්මාණය...
    (මම මේක හෙව්ව ඊයෙ...ඒත් හම්බ උනේ නෑ...)

    godak sthuthi nwnbs sahodaraya...obata theruwan saranai...
     

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    Ran thisariyata rana thisarun labiyan...ek wunu desitha ran huyakin bandiyan...Ashirwadayak! Ayeth lassana nirmanayak! Suba pathum idiri gamanata.
     

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    ලස්සනයි. ඔබ එලිසමය රකිමින් කවි නිර්මාණය කරන ආකාරය හරිම අපූරුයි..

    me satahana thabeema wenuwen mage awanka sthuthiya piliganna...
     

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    නං‍ගි‍ගෙ‍ මේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍න‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍නක‍ර‍නයේ‍ අ‍ත්‍ පො‍ත්‍ තැ‍බූ‍ ප‍ල‍මු‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍න‍ය‍....

    එ‍දා‍ අ‍පි‍ හැ‍ම දෙ‍නා‍ගේ‍ම‍ සි‍තු‍වි‍ලි‍ බ‍ණ දේ‍ශණා‍ව‍කි‍න්‍ ප‍හ‍න්‍ ක‍ර‍නවා‍ සේ‍ ශා‍න්‍ත‍ හැ‍ඟී‍ම‍ක්‍ අ‍පේ‍ හූ‍යේ‍(SL OLD HIT SONGS ADD HERE) හැ‍ම දෙ‍නා‍ටම එ‍කා‍ව‍න්‍ව දැ‍නී‍ අ‍ප‍ ඒ‍ ගැ‍න වැ‍ඩි‍ වැ‍ඩි‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍ථා‍ ක‍ර‍න්නට පෙ‍ල‍ඹු‍නා‍ කී‍වො‍ත්‍ මා‍ නි‍වැ‍ර‍දි‍යි‍...

    එ‍ලි‍ස‍ම‍ය‍ රැ‍ක ග‍නි‍මි‍න්‍ කා‍ව්‍ය‍ක‍ර‍න‍යේ‍ යෙ‍දෙ‍න‍ එ‍ක‍ සු‍ළු‍ ප‍ටු‍ අ‍භ‍්‍යා‍ස‍ය‍ක්‍ නො‍වෙ‍න‍ බ‍ව‍ මා‍ හො‍ඳා‍කා‍ර‍ව‍ම‍ ද‍න්නා‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍..එ‍ව‍න්‍ බැ‍රැ‍රු‍ම්‍ ක‍ර්ත‍ව්‍යය‍ක්‍ මෙ‍ලෙ‍ස‍ සු‍ග‍ම‍ව අ‍ප‍ට‍ ර‍ස‍ ක‍ල‍තා‍ බෙ‍දා‍ දෙ‍න‍වා‍ කි‍ය‍න්නෙ‍ ඔ‍බේ‍ කු‍ස‍ල‍තා‍ව‍ය‍ම‍ මි‍ස‍ අ‍න්‍ ක‍ව‍ර‍ක්‍ද‍??

    නං‍ගි‍යා‍ එ‍ලි‍ පෙ‍හෙ‍ලි‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍ත්‍ ජ‍ය‍ මා‍ව‍තේ‍ නො‍නැ‍ව‍තී‍ ඉ‍දි‍රි‍ය‍ට‍ම‍ ය‍න්න.

    ඔ‍බ‍ ආ‍ප‍සු‍ හැ‍රී‍ බ‍ල‍න හැ‍ම මො‍හො‍ත‍ක‍ම‍ අ‍ප‍ ඔ‍බ‍ ප‍සු‍ප‍ස සි‍ටි‍නා‍ බ‍ව‍ අ‍ම‍ත‍ක‍ ක‍ර‍න්න එ‍පා‍.. .

    ඔ‍බ‍ට‍ ජ‍ය‍!!

    me nirmaanaya eda mama SL OLD Hits thread eke pala keruwe , kawiyak liyana lesa oba mata kala aaraadanaya nisaai...meya ehi pala kala dinaye, maa dirimath karamin,mata thawath kawi nirmaanayan idiripath karana lesa oba thabuu satahana mama kruthawediwa sihipath karanawa...mata pamanak nowei, thawath pramaanyen wishaala sahodara sahodariyan pirisakata hithawathwa, karunaawanthawa, nirantharayenma oba karanaa diriganweem walata obata mage pranaamaya...
    Aiye...Obata niduk nirogi suwaya samagin siyalu yahapatha mama hadawathinma pathami...
     

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    Me kaviya godak mahansiwela liyala thiyana bawa penawa. me kale godak aya liyanne nisades, eka kavi liyanawata wada pahasuy ne. mama nisades narakay kiyanawa neme, kavi liyanna eeta wada danumak awabodayak awashyay.

    Kaviye mathraa, eliweta elisamaya gana godak mahansiwela thiyanawa. palaweni kaviya gaththoth eke "Pinbara", "Wilthala", "Nilketa", "Nimnada" yana wachanath eeta passe ena "Dine", "Dile", "Diye", "Dige" yana wachanath lassanata galapala thiyanawa. Kaviye sampurna arthaya rakena widihata mewa yodana eka harima amaru wadak. anika kavyamaya gathiyath reka ganna one. e wagema "manawan", "ratawan", "amawan", "(ran)ganawan" yana wachana pawichchi karala elisamaya lassanata araksha karala thiyanawa. mama palaweni eka udaharaneta gaththata anith hama kawiyakamath me lakshana thiyanawa. oba kochchara palapurudu kavikariyakda kiyala mama danne ne, namuth meka baluwahama penne bohoma danum therum athi palapurudu kivindiyak kiyala. kaviye reethi hama deyakma wage sampurna karala thiyanawa. aththatama kiyanawa e pilibandawa katha karanna mata obata tharam sudusukam ne kiyala kaviya dakkahama mata hithuna. e nisa mama arthaya gana tikak kiyannam.

    kaviye arthaya gaththoth, ithama sundara pathumak. pem sambandatha kshanikawa athiwena nathiwena ada kale, kapsuwahas kalak pawathina pem damak athi wenna kiyala prarthana karana eka harima sundaray, kalochithay kiyala mata hithune. meka bolanda pem pathumak neme kiyala patakayata hangenawa. "sanwara sithata", yedumen pahadili wenawa meka bolanda, kshanika pem pathumak neme kiyala. sanwara sithak illana premayath sanwara ekak wenna onene. e wagema mama me kaviye mama kamathima padhaya thamay "nanwara sasara muna gasuman hangeeyan" kiyana padhaya. e kiyanne pera athmabhawayan ge indala ekata siti dennek ge ekweema thamay prarthanaya. e padhaya yodala thiyana hatiyata mama godak kamathiy. anika eke "na' shabdayen ena anuprasa rasayakuth thiyanawa. e padhaya kiyawanakota harima sundara hangeemak athi wenawa, thaman kenekuta adaraya karanna patan gaththata passe, e adaraya hondata dalulannata gaththata passe athiwena sundara balawath bandeemath ekka apita hithenawa e kena apith ekka pasugiya athma waladith ekata inna athi kiyala.

    dan mama hadanne mata pena widihata sulu waraddak pennanna. "rana thisariyata rana thisarun labeeyan", meke thisarun kiyala bahuwachanayen yedee thiyana eka sudusu ne kiyalay mata hithune. kalin pada wala ena wachana wala anukulawa wenna athi thisarun kiyala yeduwe. habay mehema ekakuth thiyanawa, thisarun hama witama bahu wachana neme. dan bilindun, dewindun, surindun, wage yedum eka wachanay ne. api nishchitha deyak kenek gana katha karanawa nam, eka wachanarthayek ehema yodanna puluwan. meke "rana thisariyata" kiyala nishchitha thisariyak gana katha karana nisa thisarun kiyana eka nishchitha ekawachanarthayen ganna puluwan kiyala hithenawa. habay mata e gana loku danumak nam ne. obata upadesak ganna kenek innawa nam ahala balanna puluwan.

    ithin awasana washayen, me nirmanaya ithama lassana sarthaka nirmanayak kiyala mata hithenne. ada kalaye hatiyata ithama usas kaviyak kiyalay mage hangeema. kaviye gunathmakabhawayath, rasayath dekama gana godak salakili mathwela thiyanawa. Mathu nirmana sandaha me kuda satahana diriyakma wewa kiyala pathanawa.

    obage kalaawata ladi pahadili sitha, kaawya nirmaanakaranaya gana oba thula athi parinatha danuma ,maa obe me satahana thulin ithaa hondin winiwinda dutuwa...

    Mage kawi sankalpanaawa kiyawala, eya hondin addyayanaya karala, rasa windala,obage watinaa kaalaya kapakarala , e sambandawa oba liyaaa thibenne sawisthraathmaka, saaragarba wishleshanayak...


    mema satahanin ,mata pananak nowei, kaawya nirmaanaya gana unanduwak dakwana kaatath prayodanawath danumak sapayana bawath, e pilibanda awabodayak sapayana bawath maa wishwaasa karanawa...

    Ithin, nirmaanaya agayakaramin ,obage adahas dakwamin, oba thabuu me suwisheshi gunados wichaarya wenuwen, mama mahath bakthiyakin haa gawrawayakin yukthawa obata mese hadawathinma thuthi puda karami...