pain that smiles..

[twisted]

"bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles"

එළකිරි...

thanks alot bro

and i see last two lines getting much attention anyway it should have been

"bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the hate, the hate that smiles.."

 

[Suvin1122]

Hmmm...nice...

 

[twisted]

Hmmm...nice...

thank you

 

[G.R.E.A]

ur really good!!

 

[twisted]

ur really good!!

thank you

 

[GihanFX]

awesome work dude

 

[twisted]

awesome work dude

thank you

 

[RuwinRTY]

kiyewwa bro
bt wtz da meanin of dz
meke summary eka kiyanna

 

[Meeeharaka]

bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles


poh..patta tamai saho, monawada kata ...

 

[twisted]

kiyewwa bro
bt wtz da meanin of dz
meke summary eka kiyanna

it's about revenge thank you.

bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles


poh..patta tamai saho, monawada kata ...

thanks alot bro

 

[RuwinRTY]

it's about revenge thank you.

ehenam wadak naa
cnt u rite smthin abt luv

 

[twisted]

ehenam wadak naa
cnt u rite smthin abt luv

revenges a by product of love and it's as much sweet as love..even sweeter when you do it right

now ..i don't believe in that but that sure gives an idea for poetry don't you think.

 

[Dreams001]

hi
kaalekin dakke akki
ara movie eke nama hambunaada

paaniya dhannepa haridha..

joke

 

[truth4L]

as usual...awesome man..!!!

 

[Dreams001]

how far I'd go to see your face

changes as I lay my pain upon you
how sweet did I think of it always
the moment I'd smell the rose I grew​

the pain that held me to my lover
will wither away as i pluck out this flower
to reach the flower through thorns
my bloody hands must, must go on​

the cracked will be seared by the drought
the eternal drought upon my heart you brought
the sympathy i lack, in vain will be sought
in my blazing eyes, in my dead thoughts.​

my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold​

the rose full of thorns, the bloodiest of all
still I shall kiss it and favor my fall
when beauty of the rose has taken it's toll
the love of thorns, the heart of charcoal. ​

drown me in, the sweetest of tastes
in the sea of sorrow, not a tear shall waste.
bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles​

inspired by the poem anjala posted here today "revenge" and this is the first english poem i wrote after like 9 months...so excuse all the flaws. ​

yah bro..its very nice one..btw why dont you try to write some in sinhala..coz i feel like you have d spirit..

nice creation..thumbs up!

 

[twisted]

paaniya dhannepa haridha..

joke

sira don't do that.

as usual...awesome man..!!!

thanks a lot bro

yah bro..its very nice one..btw why dont you try to write some in sinhala..coz i feel like you have d spirit..

nice creation..thumbs up!

thanks bro ..ive written some in english but not often. and posted them here time to time. and thanks again.

 

[pjayampathi]

nice..

 

[¤--bACarDi--¤]

this suck man the way you presenting it is totally sucks. you lazy dawg why didn't you put this with a nice image that fits on to this poem ?
try next time you looser


-(2)

 

[twisted]

nice..

thank you

this suck man the way you presenting it is totally sucks. you lazy dawg why didn't you put this with a nice image that fits on to this poem ?
try next time you looser

-(2)

i said two more poems man did that run out yet?

i couldn't have found a picture long enough to fit this in besides too much work thank you lol.

 

[Planthis]

Mostly yes...It's true...
Nice work....