pain that smiles..

twisted

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    "bitter the love, the love that cries
    sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles"


    එළකිරි... :D

    thanks alot bro :)

    and i see last two lines getting much attention :lol: anyway it should have been

    "bitter the love, the love that cries
    sweeter the hate, the hate that smiles.."
     

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    how far I'd go to see your face

    changes as I lay my pain upon you
    how sweet did I think of it always
    the moment I'd smell the rose I grew

    the pain that held me to my lover
    will wither away as i pluck out this flower
    to reach the flower through thorns
    my bloody hands must, must go on

    the cracked will be seared by the drought
    the eternal drought upon my heart you brought
    the sympathy i lack, in vain will be sought
    in my blazing eyes, in my dead thoughts.

    my end will be my bloody desire
    in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
    the cruelty of love shall not go untold
    the love of cruelty, the heart of cold

    the rose full of thorns, the bloodiest of all
    still I shall kiss it and favor my fall
    when beauty of the rose has taken it's toll
    the love of thorns, the heart of charcoal.

    drown me in, the sweetest of tastes
    in the sea of sorrow, not a tear shall waste.
    bitter the love, the love that cries
    sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles



    inspired by the poem anjala posted here today "revenge" and this is the first english poem i wrote after like 9 months...so excuse all the flaws.
    yah bro..its very nice one..btw why dont you try to write some in sinhala..coz i feel like you have d spirit..

    nice creation..thumbs up!:)
     

    twisted

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    this suck man :oo: the way you presenting it is totally sucks. you lazy dawg :lol: why didn't you put this with a nice image that fits on to this poem ? :rolleyes:
    try next time you looser :D


    -(2) ;)
     

    twisted

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    thank you :)

    this suck man :oo: the way you presenting it is totally sucks. you lazy dawg :lol: why didn't you put this with a nice image that fits on to this poem ? :rolleyes:
    try next time you looser :D

    -(2) ;)

    i said two more poems man did that run out yet? :lol:

    i couldn't have found a picture long enough to fit this in besides too much work :) thank you lol.