how come i didn't see this sooner..first of all this is something different ive seen in ek poetry scene..you build up imagery in our minds like nobody else, including myself did before..while reading first and second verses i almost concluded that this poem is about how city is spreading over villages as well but what the hell did i know hehe..the last verse took quite a turn and ended up smoothly not letting the twist oversurpise the reader..to say, ive never liked this writing style but this is clearly an exception... i totally loved how you mixed realism and surrealism which was in most of the poem at the end of the first verse..just awesome that part is man
if i have anything to complain about this poem that would be multiple meanings you tried to present..it better should alone have been about machine-ish urban life which is hardly alive and concious as apposed to relaxing more human out of city life..may be others liked the political corruption theme that is a major mistake in society but for me ..it just ruined it for me for me this poem would have been better without elections and political frauds.
and to end, the simplicity, yet the images and symbols you had used are far supior to complicated words that could have been used ..you just conveyed your message to the fullest.
congrats for the poem it's truly a piece of work. keep going.
