like i said in another similar poem ..this profession is no basis to judge their humanity..i was never a fan of this sorta writing style to tell you the truth but after reading a few of your poems its kinda growing up on me ..
anyway what i appreciate the most is that you've spent time to go into many detail in this matter..regarding their family back ground ..financial and social issues which in the first place lead ppl to this situation..then you've portrayed the detail on the other side of the fence..it is like a much detailed painting..
as to the theme of the poem, i don't have much to say ..they are where they are because they chose to.. i don't believe in that they were so innocent men drove them there thing. but anyway its a very nice peace of work.