අත්තටු ලැබුණු දාට

Doly

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Zeus said:

පිනි බිංදුවක් උනත් සිසිස්ලස බෙද බෙද මහ පොලොවෙ හිටියට
රත්වුන දාට එයත් ගිහිල්ල හැංගෙන්නෙ ඔය කියන වලාකුලේම තමා නංගො
එ උනත් ටික කාලයක් ගියාම අයෙත් මහ පොලොවටම වැටෙනවා
සුපුරුදු සීතල අරගෙනම

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This is damn true

Nice poem sis
 
Doly said:
Zeus said:

පිනි බිංදුවක් උනත් සිසිස්ලස බෙද බෙද මහ පොලොවෙ හිටියට
රත්වුන දාට එයත් ගිහිල්ල හැංගෙන්නෙ ඔය කියන වලාකුලේම තමා නංගො
එ උනත් ටික කාලයක් ගියාම අයෙත් මහ පොලොවටම වැටෙනවා
සුපුරුදු සීතල අරගෙනම

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This is damn true

Nice poem sis

thnx sis.... nver thot u wud read ma poems...hehheeh...i like ur poems alot...:yes::yes:
 

Zeus

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    niki771 said:
    great work sis....:D:D
    mama dannawa ne oyage kawi gana.... athi tharam cmnts i'v already gvn u ne....;):D:D:D soooo jst wanna say its really nice....:yes::yes:

    Akkava baya karala comment ekak da gatta neda thanu:P:P:P:P
     

    twisted

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    nice poem ..keep writing

    hehe stay beyond the reality but just keep in touch in case you are gna miss anything..

    reminds me of one of my fav songs all the time..

    I linger in the doorway
    Of alarm clock screaming
    Monsters calling my name
    Let me stay
    Where the wind will whisper to me
    Where the raindrops, as they’re falling, tell a story

    [Chorus:]
    In my field of paper flowers
    And candy clouds of lullaby (flowers)
    I lie inside myself for hours
    And watch my purple sky fly over me (flowers)

    Don’t say I’m out of touch
    With this rampant chaos - your reality
    I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
    The nightmare I built my own world to escape

    [Chorus]

    Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
    Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
    Oh, how I long for the deep sleep dreaming
    The goddess of imaginary light
     
    twisted said:
    nice poem ..keep writing

    hehe stay beyond the reality but just keep in touch in case you are gna miss anything..

    reminds me of one of my fav songs all the time..

    I linger in the doorway
    Of alarm clock screaming
    Monsters calling my name
    Let me stay
    Where the wind will whisper to me
    Where the raindrops, as they’re falling, tell a story

    [Chorus:]
    In my field of paper flowers
    And candy clouds of lullaby (flowers)
    I lie inside myself for hours
    And watch my purple sky fly over me (flowers)

    Don’t say I’m out of touch
    With this rampant chaos - your reality
    I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
    The nightmare I built my own world to escape

    [Chorus]

    Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
    Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
    Oh, how I long for the deep sleep dreaming
    The goddess of imaginary light

    thnx 4 ur commnt mate... :) :D