අබුද්දස්ස කාලෙන් පුතුට..... ( abuddassa kalen puthuta)

[Doly]

Kaale Wesas...Thale Aluth

ehema neda sis

 

[G2H]

he he lassana nirmanayak ada godak welawata sidda wena attha kathawak..

 

[twisted]

hehe nice poem ...lassanai

 

[amila_90210]

Lassanai...Dan me Kage Baba da Nalawanne...

Methanatath Enna Tikak......http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175265

Thanks Ayya

 

[amila_90210]

very nice poem Dhulari...Like it really..these are the real tragedys of our next generation ..forgetting who we are & who we were..thanx for it

 

[~ Fiona ~]

Wow.. Nice creation..

 

[dulhari]

Kaale Wesas...Thale Aluth

ehema neda sis

kaale nam aluth thamai eeth we have to think about this is it suits or not

 

[dulhari]

Sirama kaviyak sis
Habayi ithin meva mehema una ekata eyalatama dos kiyanna ba
Mokada man hithana vidiyatanam
me deta eka hethuvak
alut paramparava mod pattata yanna giye
parana paramparave aya ape urumayan alut paramparavata hari hati pennala dunne nathi eka

Keep up wi ur good wrk sis

thank you

 

[dulhari]

very nice poem Dhulari...Like it really..these are the real tragedys of our next generation ..forgetting who we are & who we were..thanx for it

thank you very much

 

[dulhari]

he he lassana nirmanayak ada godak welawata sidda wena attha kathawak..

thanks

 

[Kasmadumala]

dekapu wenasma akaraye....ekak ape sebejevithaye muhuna dena de..padaka karagena.
lasanai.........god 1............

 

[dulhari]

dekapu wenasma akaraye....ekak ape sebejevithaye muhuna dena de..padaka karagena.
lasanai.........god 1............

thank you

 

[dulhari]

Nice one...

thanks

 

[Getta]

amuthu kawiyak ,mara gathi

 

[dulhari]

amuthu kawiyak ,mara gathi

thanks

 

[amithpeiris]

mumm fine

 

[Shguts]

good 1

 

[dulhari]

good 1

u r absolutely correct

 

[dulhari]

u r absolutely correct

Thank you very much all who comment this

 

[archirasika]

nice poem indeed...!