~මගේ බෝඩින් කාමරය~

[sagari]

Meka api me loke jeewath wena thawakalika jeewithe ganada , ehemath nath nam duk bara sidueem walin passe ea siddi walin aath wena hageemak gana da…mata hitena widiya 2 weni eka wagei,
Umama rupaka pirunu apuru nimanayak….

 

[shakespeare]

hmm...
oke bodim kaamarayakete upema kela api hamage jiwithe,herde sakshiya,aathmaya gana kele wiwereneyak kiyalai mama dakinne

ape jiwithe hama death akkeme mae 3n dena innewa
aaa wageme api kerene hama deteme mea 3n dena hawl wenewa hari waradi noselaka harimin

ayalate balapaane api kamathida nadde kiyala witherai


kaansaawete thaniwe lage siti...
eliya kaluwere samawe ath widi...
makulu dal duwili radii athi...
warada kaari smarene radii....

hmm...
kamathima kotese mekai

jiwithe aduru paalu dushkere nihada pathikadak hodate wiwereneya kerala thiyenewa



PS:mage adehasa wiwecheneya kerannne waredi nam

naa waradi naa....tawa tikak mama passe ekatu karannam

 

[DiLakshika]

oya liyla thiyenne magema bording kamare gevena mage jeevithe ganai
meka mage papuwatama danuna

weldone

 

[aravindalj]

hey dude this is maxxxaaa
meka jeevithaya wennath puluwan liyala thiyana vidihata

 

[DJ ASHAN]

niyamay

 

[G2H]

Ammooo... samaharawita.. Bodim kamaraya jeewithe abyantharaya pennana kadapathak kalada me kaviyen...

lassanai nirmanaya..

 

[maleemsg]

Bodin kamaraya kiuwe mulu jeewithetama wage....

ara shakespeare macbeth eke naluwekuta jeeiwthe samana kala wage .
oya boding kamarekata jeewithe samana karala neda?

 

[isuruimg]

machan niyama kaviyak
matath yanthan tikak therunaa eth meka godak gamburu deyak kiyala penawa
nice one machan MAxxa

 

[tharuksha123]

ammmaa....maxa parak
hrt touching

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

nokiyu da boho sagawi atha...athithaye mathakayan atharin pathara awadi wela atha...neda?

 

[shakespeare]

Frst of all thnx a lot 4 da invitation kolla
Eth man samanyen kaviyaka hangila tiyenav deval terumganna puluvan jathiye kenek nam nenevei

MAtath terenava me kaviya amuthu saha godak deval hanguna ekak bava

Me vage deval matath vela tiyenava bro
Ape iskole man hitapu panthi valata and gedara mage kamarayata katha karanna puluvannam
Ekatha samahara vita HArry potter, JAmes bond vagema popular vennath puluvan
Me vage godak deval valata muuna dunna kenekge hondama yaluva venne tanikama tamaa

Me kaviya lihilen kiyanna puluvannam man veg mattonta godak prayojanavath veyi
ANyway nice writing style and PS wrk machoo
Habayi vachananam taramak darunui

Balagena giyama Adareye subtopics kochcharanam tiyenavada
Koyi taram nam poems liyavenavada?
Eka kavadavath navatina ekak na

mehemai bro meke tiyenne gambura tulin gambura windimak nemei.....eka nam amaaruwenna puluwan.....eth meke tiyenne sarala bawa tulin gambura dakeema....taman kawiya kiyaweema saha taman kawiyata aaruda weema kiyanne dekak......

THANKS BRO

 

[shakespeare]

hmm...
oke bodim kaamarayakete upema kela api hamage jiwithe,herde sakshiya,aathmaya gana kele wiwereneyak kiyalai mama dakinne

ape jiwithe hama death akkeme mae 3n dena innewa
aaa wageme api kerene hama deteme mea 3n dena hawl wenewa hari waradi noselaka harimin

ayalate balapaane api kamathida nadde kiyala witherai


kaansaawete thaniwe lage siti...
eliya kaluwere samawe ath widi...
makulu dal duwili radii athi...
warada kaari smarene radii....

hmm...
kamathima kotese mekai

jiwithe aduru paalu dushkere nihada pathikadak hodate wiwereneya kerala thiyenewa



PS:mage adehasa wiwecheneya kerannne waredi nam

ow atta.habai meka tawath assata yanna puluwan..

 

[shakespeare]

can relate this poem to many things..it's really nice and it's kinda like a frame ...in which the reader can add their own feelings and thoughts ..so im not going to write down my own meaning though..

very good creation

thnks

 

[shakespeare]

hmmmmmmmmm bara wachana godakin piruna kaviyak. lassanay thawa liyanna

thanks

 

[archirasika]

honda nirmanayak....wadiya nositana pattak...good work.keep it up..

(matath ohoma ekak tibba)

 

[shakespeare]

Ela kaviyak machan...

thanks

 

[shakespeare]

hiki hik hik hiki hik hik

hehe...thanks

 

[shakespeare]

gud one dude!

thanks

 

[shakespeare]

Meka api me loke jeewath wena thawakalika jeewithe ganada , ehemath nath nam duk bara sidueem walin passe ea siddi walin aath wena hageemak gana da…mata hitena widiya 2 weni eka wagei,
Umama rupaka pirunu apuru nimanayak….

thanks sagari

 

[shakespeare]

oya liyla thiyenne magema bording kamare gevena mage jeevithe ganai
meka mage papuwatama danuna

weldone

thanks