Amathaka Kala Vasanthaya

[upuli.w.]

 

[uhox]

visheshita u kavya akruthiyak (poetic structure) bawitha kara thiyenawa....
ein Vishesha lesa nisadesa (free verse) thula pataka (readers) sithuvili genagos thibenawa

mama oya liyapu aneth kaviyath kiyewuwa....(thewasaraka awasanaya)
Oba Sammathayen beherawa yamak desa beliya heki ayek bawa penawa....

rupaka (metaphors) vividathwaya thawa bawith karanna...e kiyuwe
ara Kavya vichara kalawedi api kiyanawa wage, ara
Mala (flower) saha Sanda( moon) yana rupaka walata pamanak seema nowanna..

obata dura gamanak ya hekiya

suba pethum

 

[upuli.w.]

Uhox,
Godak sthuthiy comments walata....
I appreciate it very much.....have a look at my other posts too....I have posted 14 poems so far....
langadi post karanna patan gatte....eth samahara kavi liyala godak kal...oya honda wicharakayek..hethuth ekkama pehedili karala deela thiyenawa, thats good!
Thanks again....I will try to go beyond those metaphors...thanks again! TC

 

[G2H]

Godaak Lassana Nirmanayak..

Keep it up Upuli..

 

[chamee777]

agodak lassana wenas nirmanayak....

ElaKiri.................Keep it Up

 

[kumali]

Wasanthayedi godak mal pipenakota...Gimhane pipuna thani mala amathaka wenawa...oka thamai jeewithe hati ...Lassanai dear

 

[ireshasy]

mmmm
i like the way u write poems........
deep meaning....strange words.....

 

[samithawijemanna]

godak hithata danunu nirmanayak
godak lassanai

 

[*legend*]

Mukuth prasnayak ehema na neda ?

Great Work ohoma yaaaan

 

[*legend*]

godak hithata danunu nirmanayak
godak lassanai

Attada

 

[isharaharindrajith1993]

ela bro...

 

[samithawijemanna]

Attada

ow aiye

(Dilan giya )

 

[vishankapraveen]

 

[Wolverine GTR]

LAssanai.........
Thanxxxxxxx 4 shareing!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

lassanai.

 

[upuli.w.]

Hi guyz thanks for the comments, they all count....I appreciate them!

 

[thanu26]

wow sisi...great wrk..........it has a deep meaning...suprb.....
lassanata liyala thiyenawa....good luck dr.....

 

[Meeeharaka]

Hematenama maru kawi....

 

[thanu26]

Hematenama maru kawi....

ekanam aththa... hehhe

 

[Danu_123]

Adare mayawak ape parisaraye thiyana wayuwak wageth .koi wele wayuwa nathuwa api mareida dan na.wiswasa keralath ba nokerath ba neada.oyage adahaswalata mage athdakimenma mama akaga wenawa godak hithata danuna.thawa liyanna