` Apa Bademu......Yali Bademu `

[Doly]

 

[Zaku]

harima lassanai akki...

 

[Malinga]

sithaka bandeem kiyanne yatharathaya vatahagannata ma nohaki tharum anthagaami vena hangum samudaayak. yathaarthaya vatahenne vu namuth e bandeem valin midenna bohovita sithakata hakivenne nae. e yathaarthaya thulama kotharum miringuvak pasu pasa duvanne vu namudu e mathama elbaganeemata bandeem kiyana de sithak polabavanava. e vagea hangum ketikota me nirmanaya apuuruvata karala thiyanava. bohoma alankaarai.

 

[twisted]

lets say two people are in love ..and only place they can meet eachother is internet..and in that way they have no future..it's no physical either yet love is all that matters and in spite of the consciousness that suggests otherwise heart years that love which is almost impossible..eka thamai matanan meken therune..hugak hondai ..

 

[bundy123]

Great Doly

 

[Doly]

harima lassanai akki...

Thanks Nanga

 

[Doly]

sithaka bandeem kiyanne yatharathaya vatahagannata ma nohaki tharum anthagaami vena hangum samudaayak. yathaarthaya vatahenne vu namuth e bandeem valin midenna bohovita sithakata hakivenne nae. e yathaarthaya thulama kotharum miringuvak pasu pasa duvanne vu namudu e mathama elbaganeemata bandeem kiyana de sithak polabavanava. e vagea hangum ketikota me nirmanaya apuuruvata karala thiyanava. bohoma alankaarai.

Appreciate your comments Maling Aiya.......
hamadama kiyanawa wahe hithta danena de nidahase liyanawa
thats it

 

[rainbow01983]

nice
eth gaburui wage

 

[Doly]

lets say two people are in love ..and only place they can meet eachother is internet..and in that way they have no future..it's no physical either yet love is all that matters and in spite of the consciousness that suggests otherwise heart years that love which is almost impossible..eka thamai matanan meken therune..hugak hondai ..

hmmmmm! not at all. say a girl who has no hopes abt future....but she is loving some one madly & even she forgot her real situation.something like that

 

[Doly]

Great Doly

Thanks Buny Aiya

 

[Doly]

nice
eth gaburui wage

hmmmmm thank u

 

[twisted]

hmmmmm! not at all. say a girl who has no hopes abt future....but she is loving some one madly & even she forgot her real situation.something like that

the essence of poetry is to leave the readers open to interpret the poem in their way don't you think hehe so whatever you meant with your words readers can give their own meanings to it ..that shows the maturity of your creation ..

 

[Doly]

the essence of poetry is to leave the readers open to interpret the poem in their way don't you think hehe so whatever you meant with your words readers can give their own meanings to it ..that shows the maturity of your creation ..

difinitely..........you are welcome to feel or say anything
& i expecting deficient in ma poem

 

[rainbow01983]

hmmmmm thank u

wc

 

[mottaya]

hari shoke....
eth mata terune na...

 

[randula01]

Nice one...........

 

[Doly]

hari shoke....
eth mata terune na...

hmmmmmmm

 

[Doly]

Nice one...........

Thanksssssssss

 

[chamee777]

 

[Pentagram]

honda nirmanayak!