PoEm

[maleemsg]

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[LAPD]

omg its a very harsh poem, bt nice

 

[nirwan]

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Brilliant malee

 

[dewasmitha]

wow akki niyamai

 

[rudayas]

hmmmm
life s sooo beautiful
ther a lotz of thingz to b
so cheerz up malee

 

[naleema]

wow malee nice....

 

[tharuksha123]

amma
tikak sara wadi wenawane

anyway ,max poem akki
uparimai

 

[sulakshi123]

adura thula siteemen palak kima weda
sithe gaburta eliya yomu kara
sithat gal kara nohada siti lesa
sapaa nokaran palak nathi lesa.

anyway nice poem akki..hope u r an akki for me..

 

[thm14]

Haffata udu
malee akka amuthuma ekak liyala
but maara gathi , maxxa
Keep them coming akkiyoooooo

 

[shakespeare]

wait

 

[~ Fiona ~]

nice poem akki..
A bit different one..
keep it up..

 

[DiLakshika]

All the best

its just Superb

 

[archirasika]

me mokoo malee? bayath hitenawa? oyatath counsalling parak onida? hikz

nize poem..its true, adaraya, anukampawa saha awegaya enne godak welawata langin...adarayen passe anukamapawa ho awegaya enawa..e awastawa tama me.. nice one keep it up...(please empty your pm inbox)

 

[aravindalj]

haffaaaaa jeevithaya gene hodatama kalakirunu kaviyak ne meka
jeevithaya lassanai balanna
kumudu oba wata natavi
pini bindu obawa vikasitha karavi
ithin dees arinna
mee obe jeevithayai

 

[jayanthah]

OMG What happened in my absence...................

Nice poem Sis....................(Well, not really NICE!!!)

Well written, I like the dark sort of stuff............reminds me of Marrylin Manson lyrics...........

Good work!!!

 

[jayanthah]

haffaaaaa jeevithaya gene hodatama kalakirunu kaviyak ne meka
jeevithaya lassanai balanna
kumudu oba wata natavi
pini bindu obawa vikasitha karavi
ithin dees arinna
mee obe jeevithayai

Ha...............ha..........umba mehema kiyala...........yatin kiyanawa, "you have failed, please die" kiyala...................wadey kethai, marenna yana ekata ellenna kambayak dunna wagey wedak

 

[malkavi]

Jeewithayata sapa karala wedak ne nangi...

 

[maleemsg]

OMG....

me yakkune.. meka just only a poem... mage eththa xperience ekak newei....!

thanx all

 

[malkavi]

OMG....

me yakkune.. meka just only a poem... mage eththa xperience ekak newei....!

thanx all

ane pala yaksaniye yanna.............

 

[maleemsg]

ane pala yaksaniye yanna.............

adoo moko me ude pandara maithri bawanawa wadanne?

mage poem eka sassanaida kiyannako aiyeeeeeee