What Did I Do Wrong

[Doly]

We were so close together
Now so far apart
What happened in between
I can only feel in my heart

I wish you were here
To talk with me today
But I can't give a call
My heart won't obey

Things seemed to be so perfect
Now they seem so wrong
I don't feel as though I know you
Where has our friendship gone??

I still don't know what has happened
Our friendship has lasted so long
But I can't help from wondering
What did I do wrong ??



Minu

With lots of pain


( im sorry friends if i bothring you with my this kind of poems.......
i just putting out my feelings....plz forgive me)

 

[snishantha]

Oyage best friend da?

 

[ishanroz]

When I look at your eyes, I see your true self.
I see you're sweet, and caring.
I see you're giving and forgiving.
I see your love for me.

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying
When I'm alone and think about your eyes I cry.
I can't stop thinking that one day I'll never see those eyes again
That I'll never see the love or the sweetness
Or the love that makes you who you are.
One day you'll be gone - gone from me.
Gone from this world.
No matter what happens, those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace.

But you'll never be completely gone,
Because every time I close my eyes,
There you will be.

 

[hbkrandil7]

Nice....

 

[sirajstc]

minu sorry

 

[Doly]

Oyage best friend da?

hmmmmmmmmm!

 

[Doly]

When I look at your eyes, I see your true self.
I see you're sweet, and caring.
I see you're giving and forgiving.
I see your love for me.

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying
When I'm alone and think about your eyes I cry.
I can't stop thinking that one day I'll never see those eyes again
That I'll never see the love or the sweetness
Or the love that makes you who you are.
One day you'll be gone - gone from me.
Gone from this world.
No matter what happens, those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace.

But you'll never be completely gone,
Because every time I close my eyes,
There you will be.

thanks ishan

 

[thm14]

Nice 1...

 

[Doly]

Nice....

thanksssssssssss

 

[Mackenzie]

Nice..

 

[malkavi]

hmmm........

 

[Doly]

minu sorry

its ok Siraj....

 

[Doly]

Nice 1...

Thankssssssss

 

[Doly]

Nice..

thanks

 

[Doly]

hmmm........

what happened? anything wrong in this poem??

 

[mldarshana]

 

[malkavi]

what happened? anything wrong in this poem??

no no...nothing....its nice....

 

[dxxcxxxx]

Wonderful poem dear....

 

[ozone_buzzer]

wa wa...

 

[Doly]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!