~Why I Am Alone??~

thelaa rox · Mar 13, 2010

elaaaaaaaaaaZ

one_genuine · Mar 13, 2010

because you are KrAzy....

(jk)

nice one....

keep it up bro.. indite more...

Dharatha · Mar 13, 2010

quote ''but I hve never feel it'' unquote

should end in pass tense ''but i had never felt it''

KrAzY_iN_LuV · Mar 14, 2010

thelaa rox said:
elaaaaaaaaaaZ

Thx

one_genuine said:
because you are KrAzy....(jk)

nice one....
keep it up bro.. indite more...

Thx bro

Dharatha said:
quote ''but I hve never feel it'' unquote

should end in pass tense ''but i had never felt it''

English cls ekata passe ennam

twisted · Mar 14, 2010

i can copy paste the comment i posted on your previous poem here... work on your grammar first bro. then try to write ..read lots of poems by popular and contemporary poets...first start with little rhymes...keep writing more and more simple lines.

KrAzY_iN_LuV · Mar 14, 2010

twisted said:
i can copy paste the comment i posted on your previous poem here... work on your grammar first bro. then try to write ..read lots of poems by popular and contemporary poets...first start with little rhymes...keep writing more and more simple lines.

Thx bro..!
i will!

twisted · Mar 14, 2010

Dharatha said:
quote ''but I hve never feel it'' unquote

should end in pass tense ''but i had never felt it''

what's a pass tense? :confused:

twisted · Mar 14, 2010

KrAzY_iN_LuV said:
Thx bro..!
i will!

your grammars relatively good but it's flowed i think you don't pay much attention..read what you wrote aloud a few time before posting it ..you've done a few careless mistakes in your text. think you know grammar but too careless.

KrAzY_iN_LuV · Mar 14, 2010

twisted said:
your grammars relatively good but it's flowed i think you don't pay much attention..read what you wrote aloud a few time before posting it ..you've done a few careless mistakes in your text. think you know grammar but too careless.