~you gave my life a start~

[kassaD]

this is my first English poem ever!

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[nelik]

mmmmmm nice Poem

 

[Elysium]

niz poem bro! the imaginary behalf of stars r giving different meaning

 

[hamish]

good work....

 

[Doly]

nice wordings, the Stars and you!! both in same torment
missing someone..very close..
in the lonely hours of night..
The tale which heart tells every night and it takes you in that world, that place
A sweet hug from me for this Poem

 

[kassaD]

mmmmmm nice Poem

thanks bro

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

a good life start bro.. keep going!!!

 

[ronsilva]

There is a very special romantic message underneath every verse in your poem.
Great effort bro...keep writing....

 

[pjayampathi]

nice

 

[kassaD]

niz poem bro! the imaginary behalf of stars r giving different meaning

thanks sis

 

[DJANURADHA@mp3]

its nice aiya:: gdluck

 

[coolkasun]

Nice Creation bro , Good Luck

 

[archirasika]

shaaa...good good...digatama liyamu malli.....

 

[blackroses]

u miss the D bro...

keep it up.......

try to write in bilingual always....

 

[kasuncj]

nice bro

 

[dulhari]

WOW.... VERY BEAUTIFUL MALLI..... THAT START WILL REMAIN AS IT IS ... IT HAS NO END.... ALL THE BEST MALLI

 

[Kasmadumala]

hoda nirmanayak....thaman pethana thenata ya uthu....

 

[kassaD]

nice wordings, the Stars and you!! both in same torment
missing someone..very close..
in the lonely hours of night..
The tale which heart tells every night and it takes you in that world, that place
A sweet hug from me for this Poem

A big big thanks Minu.without you, this kind of stuff will never arrives to my mind coz that missing person is you!

 

[kassaD]

a good life start bro.. keep going!!!

thanks Asoka aiya

 

[kassaD]

There is a very special romantic message underneath every verse in your poem.
Great effort bro...keep writing....

thanks ron bro