~you gave my life a start~

[kassaD]

nice

thanks

 

[sl_pissa]

තරු කැට අතරින් පියඹා යන අහිංසක ආදරය.ලස්සණයි.සුභ පැතුම්!

 

[elamanzzz]

good work....

 

[TearDrop]

This is such a nice poem..It has a smooth touch and flow. ..All the best !

 

[m3pium]

Nice poem Bro. wonderful story.....
Good luck.........

 

[chriela]

Nice writing!!!!

 

[nwnbs]

wOw...nice one bro...keep it up...all the best...

 

[chintha4u]

It's wonderful. Nicely expressed.