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Doly

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lek said:

as karakawanna deyak eya kiyala na.
Dil is a Great poet & she has give a advice.
hoda poet kenek nam anith aya kiyana ewa ahanawa. oya monada poem gana danne :P
yalukamata as karakawanna neme. kiyala thiyena de terum ganna:yes:
 

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Doly said:
as karakawanna deyak eya kiyala na.
Dil is a Great poet & she has give a advice.
hoda poet kenek nam anith aya kiyana ewa ahanawa. oya monada poem gana danne :P
yalukamata as karakawanna neme. kiyala thiyena de terum ganna:yes:

e unata ohoma kiyana eka waradi ne sis...he's a new one...and every1 is nt perfect...kawruth upathinma poems liyanna danne na ne sis...liyanna liyanna thama exp wadi wenne...mehema kiwaham poem liyanna thiya kiyawanna wath hithenne na....:oo: :oo: :oo:
 

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lek said:
e unata ohoma kiyana eka waradi ne sis...he's a new one...and every1 is nt perfect...kawruth upathinma poems liyanna danne na ne sis...liyanna liyanna thama exp wadi wenne...mehema kiwaham poem liyanna thiya kiyawanna wath hithenne na....:oo: :oo: :oo:

yamak kiyanna one terena kenekuta. oyata terum karanna mama danne na.
just read again & again wot she has told.
advice karala thiyenne ehena ganna kiyala misak poem eka kathai kiyala neme. try to understand that simple thig. IF U CAN :P
 

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Doly said:
yamak kiyanna one terena kenekuta. oyata terum karanna mama danne na.
just read again & again wot she has told.
advice karala thiyenne ehena ganna kiyala misak poem eka kathai kiyala neme. try to understand that simple thig. IF U CAN :P

man danne na sis......mata nam therena hatiyata it's nt a good way to give a advice...:no: :no: ...as we know that's nt the way to treat a newcomer... :oo:
mama danne na Kaviyo aluth aya pili ganne mehemada kiyala??:confused: :confused:
 

Doly

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man danne na sis......mata nam therena hatiyata it's nt a good way to give a advice...:no: :no: ...as we know that's nt the way to treat a newcomer... :oo:
mama danne na Kaviyo aluth aya pili ganne mehemada kiyala??:confused: :confused:

moda katha kiyanna ela :baffled: :oo:
 
Agree with dil 100%:yes::yes::yes:..poem ekak poest karana kota tikak hitanna wenawa.wachana tikak dapu paliyata eka rate kara gatta paliyala poem ekak wenne na.metana godak aya "sira niyamai poem eka" kiyala tiyanawa.but ubata hadawathin ma comment eka dala tiyenne dil witarai....ekata sathutu wenna.mokada me poem ekata hodama comment eka hambawela dil gen."gal" saha "mal" dekama expect karapan poem ekak danakota.galak wadunama poem liyana eka natara karana eka neme wade...advice eka hitata aragena tawa hoda creation ekak dapan kattiyata taru penna.loke katawath poem liyanna bakiyala deyak na...eka nisa try karapan...nice try dude..hope u write again!
 
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    kassaD said:
    Agree with dil 100%:yes::yes::yes:..poem ekak poest karana kota tikak hitanna wenawa.wachana tikak dapu paliyata eka rate kara gatta paliyala poem ekak wenne na.metana godak aya "sira niyamai poem eka" kiyala tiyanawa.but ubata hadawathin ma comment eka dala tiyenne dil witarai....ekata sathutu wenna.mokada me poem ekata hodama comment eka hambawela dil gen."gal" saha "mal" dekama expect karapan poem ekak danakota.galak wadunama poem liyana eka natara karana eka neme wade...advice eka hitata aragena tawa hoda creation ekak dapan kattiyata taru penna.loke katawath poem liyanna bakiyala deyak na...eka nisa try karapan...nice try dude..hope u write again!
    ow machan mama kalaya aragena hoda creation 1 karanwa machan..thx.....dil 1 mage kisima tarahak na.....