~මගේ බෝඩින් කාමරය~

[shakespeare]

~මගේ බෝඩින් කාමරය~

Me mage EK eke 11 weni kawiya....

Meka tikak wenas kawiyak....

Kawiya tUla godak dewal hangala tiyanawa....

hondata kiyawanna...

oyalage comments godak watinawa....

 

[crazy_girl]

Hmm.. sahenda gamburui.. yathaarthaya pennum karamin jeewithe gana alankaarawa nirmanathmakawa sadahan kerala tyenawa.. lassana nirmaanathmaka nirmanayak shakespear..
Keep it up !!
Well done !!

 

[Zeus]

Kawiya tUla godak dewal hangala tiyanawa....

hondata kiyawanna...

Frst of all thnx a lot 4 da invitation kolla
Eth man samanyen kaviyaka hangila tiyenav deval terumganna puluvan jathiye kenek nam nenevei

MAtath terenava me kaviya amuthu saha godak deval hanguna ekak bava

Me vage deval matath vela tiyenava bro
Ape iskole man hitapu panthi valata and gedara mage kamarayata katha karanna puluvannam
Ekatha samahara vita HArry potter, JAmes bond vagema popular vennath puluvan
Me vage godak deval valata muuna dunna kenekge hondama yaluva venne tanikama tamaa

Me kaviya lihilen kiyanna puluvannam man veg mattonta godak prayojanavath veyi
ANyway nice writing style and PS wrk machoo
Habayi vachananam taramak darunui

Balagena giyama Adareye subtopics kochcharanam tiyenavada
Koyi taram nam poems liyavenavada?
Eka kavadavath navatina ekak na

 

[Doly]

hmmmmmmmm!

its tooooooooooo touching
hudak hithata wadina wachanawalin liyala thiyena hoda poem ekak

Great

 

[.:~AB~.:]

aulak na niyameta tiyanawa.
thx bro

 

[rustyc]

hmm...
oke bodim kaamarayakete upema kela api hamage jiwithe,herde sakshiya,aathmaya gana kele wiwereneyak kiyalai mama dakinne

ape jiwithe hama death akkeme mae 3n dena innewa
aaa wageme api kerene hama deteme mea 3n dena hawl wenewa hari waradi noselaka harimin

ayalate balapaane api kamathida nadde kiyala witherai


kaansaawete thaniwe lage siti...
eliya kaluwere samawe ath widi...
makulu dal duwili radii athi...
warada kaari smarene radii....

hmm...
kamathima kotese mekai

jiwithe aduru paalu dushkere nihada pathikadak hodate wiwereneya kerala thiyenewa



PS:mage adehasa wiwecheneya kerannne waredi nam

 

[Zeus]

Hmm.. sahenda gamburui.. yathaarthaya pennum karamin jeewithe gana alankaarawa nirmanathmakawa sadahan kerala tyenawa.. lassana nirmaanathmaka nirmanayak shakespear..
Keep it up !!
Well done !!

Oyata terenavanam matath kiyala dennakao

 

[Zeus]

hmm...
oke bodim kaamarayakete upema kela api hamage jiwithe,herde sakshiya,aathmaya .......

jiwithe aduru paalu dushkere nihada pathikadak hodate wiwereneya kerala thiyenewa



PS:mage adehasa wiwecheneya kerannne waredi nam

Me kaviyata dalavanam varadi na eth oyage sigiya dihath baluvamanam menna me tika kiyana one
Gvithe oya kiyana taram anduru nam na
Thats all
Man dannaa umbe probs monada kiyala
Eth man eka deyak dannava
Hitanna epa machan umbata vitarai me deval une kiyala
Umbata vunata vada 1000 gunayak deval vechchi minissuth sartaka vela tiyenava
Cheer up man

 

[shakespeare]

Hmm.. sahenda gamburui.. yathaarthaya pennum karamin jeewithe gana alankaarawa nirmanathmakawa sadahan kerala tyenawa.. lassana nirmaanathmaka nirmanayak shakespear..
Keep it up !!
Well done !!

thsnks.........

 

[twisted]

can relate this poem to many things..it's really nice and it's kinda like a frame ...in which the reader can add their own feelings and thoughts ..so im not going to write down my own meaning though..

very good creation

 

[crazy_girl]

Oyata terenavanam matath kiyala dennakao

passe welawaka kiyala PM ekak ewannam aiya.. nw nt in a mood to xplain.. sry !!

 

[sachii]

hmmmmmmmmm bara wachana godakin piruna kaviyak. lassanay thawa liyanna

 

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Ela kaviyak machan...

 

[Zeus]

passe welawaka kiyala PM ekak ewannam aiya.. nw nt in a mood to xplain.. sry !!

I cn udstand sis its ok

 

[shakespeare]

hmmmmmmmm!

its tooooooooooo touching
hudak hithata wadina wachanawalin liyala thiyena hoda poem ekak

Great

thnks

 

[shakespeare]

Frst of all thnx a lot 4 da invitation kolla
Eth man samanyen kaviyaka hangila tiyenav deval terumganna puluvan jathiye kenek nam nenevei

MAtath terenava me kaviya amuthu saha godak deval hanguna ekak bava

Me vage deval matath vela tiyenava bro
Ape iskole man hitapu panthi valata and gedara mage kamarayata katha karanna puluvannam
Ekatha samahara vita HArry potter, JAmes bond vagema popular vennath puluvan
Me vage godak deval valata muuna dunna kenekge hondama yaluva venne tanikama tamaa

Me kaviya lihilen kiyanna puluvannam man veg mattonta godak prayojanavath veyi
ANyway nice writing style and PS wrk machoo
Habayi vachananam taramak darunui

Balagena giyama Adareye subtopics kochcharanam tiyenavada
Koyi taram nam poems liyavenavada?
Eka kavadavath navatina ekak na

thanks bro...mama try karanawa

 

[rudayas]

hiki hik hik hiki hik hik

 

[shakespeare]

aulak na niyameta tiyanawa.
thx bro

thanks

 

[shakespeare]

aulak na niyameta tiyanawa.
thx bro

thanks

 

[kassaD]

gud one dude!