~ මරණය ~ .......................

[Doly]

maranayata mamath asai, eeth enne naa apita one welawata. maranaya samahawita maa atharamagama dama gosya. maranayata atha wanuwath enne nathi tharam durakata................

mara lassanai i like it

Mama nam marenna kamathi na. etha matarenna baya na

kenek me loketa eddi eya maranayath aran enne. eka katath podui.
Marena eka apita uruma deyak unata.....maranaya enna kalin apita maranaya lan kara ganna aithiyak na ....

mama ehema hithanawa

 

[19830129]

ammooooooooooooo
me chooty kella hithala thiyena dura

 

[19830129]

Ai me hamoma " Maranaya " kiyana deta mechchara baya??
mata eka sahena prashnayak.
eka katha karanna hoda nathi wachanayak da??

ane naha
oya aththa kiyala thiyenne
eth hamoma bayai
wenwenna kamathi ayagen

 

[Wolverine GTR]

Jeevithaya anithyai

Aiya HarI!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Zeus]

Jeevithaya anithyai

Aravinda type kaviyak neda ayiye

Nice creation sis and PS too

 

[Kasmadumala]

danna.deyak unata.samaharakata.oka.....notheranawa...thaman antimata.yanne ,leheththi wenne okata.kiyala......
danna nondanna ayata.......hoda watina .idea.ekak akuru karapu heti...agei.....
lassanai....:

 

[twisted]

different and good idea hehe but rhymes are a bit forced it appears and it ruins the poem for me..

 

[DiLakshika]

Death is something that God has created for the ppl
it is a nature thing & of coz you should not affraid .

when it comes you have to go

Nice Creation minu

 

[kassaD]

no comments.....sory

 

[Doly]

ammooooooooooooo
me chooty kella hithala thiyena dura

Podi luku one nane Aiye maranaya gana hitanna neda??

 

[Doly]

ane naha
oya aththa kiyala thiyenne
eth hamoma bayai
wenwenna kamathi ayagen

baya unata wadak nane aiye
yanna welawa awama yannama wenawane

 

[Doly]

Aravinda type kaviyak neda ayiye

Nice creation sis and PS too

hik

Math Aravinda wage liyanna hadanne
epada??

 

[Doly]

danna.deyak unata.samaharakata.oka.....notheranawa...thaman antimata.yanne ,leheththi wenne okata.kiyala......
danna nondanna ayata.......hoda watina .idea.ekak akuru karapu heti...agei.....
lassanai....:

Thanks brother

 

[Doly]

different and good idea hehe but rhymes are a bit forced it appears and it ruins the poem for me..

hmmmmm!

Thanks brother for ur comment

 

[wick321]

ME...MOKO....

 

[Doly]

Death is something that God has created for the ppl
it is a nature thing & of coz you should not affraid .

when it comes you have to go

Nice Creation minu

hmmmmm!

Thanks Akkiyo

 

[Doly]

no comments.....sory

Tharaha giyada oyata??

 

[Doly]

ME...MOKO....

Ane Aiye............
Meka nikam Poem ekak vitarai