~ සේපාලිකා මල ~

[chintha4u]

Ai sepalika malata mokada wela thiyenne ??

 

[Doly]

100% bro.. she is not like b4...

Hapooooooooooo
mage aiyala dennath ekka kavi liyanna bari wei wage
mokada meeeeeeee?? meka kaviyak ane
mama tamath 100% kalin nangamai

 

[Doly]

hmmmmm.hangichcha terumak tiyana poem ekak.lassanai..eth dukak hangila tiyanawa.PS work ekath lassanai..excellent minu!

hmmmm!
ow...loku terumak thiyenawa
Thanks oyage comment ekata kasun aiye

 

[Doly]

ගැ‍හැ‍ණි‍ය‍ක්‍ ම‍හ‍ මෙ‍ර‍ ව‍ගේ‍ නො‍සෙ‍ල්‍වී‍ සි‍ටි‍ය‍ යු‍තු‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍ක්‍.. (ම‍ගේ‍ අ‍ම්‍ම‍ගෙ‍න්‍ ඇ‍ගේ‍ ජි‍වි‍ත‍ය‍ පු‍රා‍ ම‍ම‍ දැ‍ක්‍ක සැ‍බෑ‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍)

අ‍ද‍ ද‍ව‍සේ‍ කු‍ඩා‍ පැ‍ල‍ය‍ක්‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ සි‍ත‍ තු‍ල‍ රෝ‍ප‍න‍ය‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍න්නා‍ ශක්‍ති‍ය‍ හා‍ අ‍භි‍යෝ‍ග‍ය‍න්‍ට කෙ‍ලි‍න්‍ම‍ මු‍හු‍න‍ දී‍මේ‍ ශක්‍යතා‍ව‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ ම‍තු‍ දි‍න‍යේ‍ අ‍ම්‍මා‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍කු‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍පා‍ බි‍ම‍ ද‍මන්න කො‍හෙ‍ත්‍ම‍ බැ‍රි‍ ම‍හා‍ වි‍ස‍ල්‍ රු‍ක්‍ෂය‍ක්‍ බ‍ව‍ට‍ ඔ‍බ‍ව‍ ප‍රි‍පු‍ර්ණ ක‍ර‍නු‍ ල‍බ‍න්නේ‍...

නං‍ගි‍ය‍ගේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍ණය‍ සා‍ර්ථක නි‍ස‍යි‍ මෙ‍ච්‍ච‍ර‍ ක‍තා‍ ක‍ලේ‍...

Aiye......

mama mage Jeevithe Yakada gahanu dennekwa dakala thiyenawa. ekkenek mage Amma. anith kena mage Akki ( Dil )

jeevitheta muna denne kohomda kiyala mama egena gatte eyalagen....
yam yam kala walidi minissunwa kadan watenawa. bimatama watenawa.duka ewara wenakam vidawanna wenawa. habai amaruwen nagittoth .....aye kawadawath watenneth na.
me mawa watuna kale. bimatama watuna kale.
nagitinna kalayak yavi. mama nagitinawamai

 

[twisted]

lassanai nangi...if this is your way of expressing ..id say keep writing these. don't keep em inside. its a good way. nice poem.

 

[Meeeharaka]

lassana galagena yana gathiyak thiyenawa kawiye....

 

[Doly]

The poem express your feeling and pain clearly
Its a very touching poem,
really you have the magic of writing that your each and every poem becomes the mirror which reflects your heart and its pain truly

comeon cutee
move ahead in your life
I want to read your poem having the feeling of joy next time
However, as a poem, liked the careful choice of words used to depict your feelings and its rhythm in most places

Thanks Bro reading, understanding
and reply on my poem ...
and also grateful to you for
appreciation and encouraging words

 

[Doly]

lassana lassana nirmanayak akka.....

Thank you Bro

 

[Doly]

loku aruthak katikarapu padha peli keepayak neda ?.... lassana kathawak sangawapu kawya nirmanayak .. lassanai , eth arthaya gaththama dukai

Thanks Brother comment ekata

 

[Doly]

සාර්ථක නිර්මාණයක්...ලස්සනයි...ඒත් හිතට දුකක් දැනෙනවා...
(මම ආසම මල සේපාලිකා මල...)

Thanks

Sepalika mala monataram Lassana Unath< Suwada Unath Wadak name. Udeta parawela yanawa

 

[Doly]

Ai sepalika malata mokada wela thiyenne ??

Mukuth wela na
oya enne apuruwata

 

[rudayas]

ela

 

[Doly]

lassanai nangi...if this is your way of expressing ..id say keep writing these. don't keep em inside. its a good way. nice poem.

thats was i did . personally i feel that we shoudnt keep pain in side
thanking you for ur comment

 

[Doly]

lassana galagena yana gathiyak thiyenawa kawiye....

Thank you Brother

 

[Anakin_Skywalker]

lassanaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......... elaaazzzz akiiyaaaaazzzz....

 

[Doly]

lassanaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......... elaaazzzz akiiyaaaaazzzz....

Thanks For the comment Brother