~Make You Mine Forever ......!~

[Doly]

 

[nwnbs]

Very Romentinc nangiyo...

 

[Planthis]

LOVE is a miracle all the time.....
Though it's a such a little word, no one explained it yet. no one can...and no one will...

Love comes with lots of innocent expectations and fragile feelings.....

But here in this poem I believe...
There are no losrs in love..
According to the poem I feel the poet is already succeeded in this miraculous feeling ...

Nice creation Minu nangi...
I cld feel it, smell it....
Weldone.....

 

[j2l]

We all laugh
we all cry ..
I heard They say
but I was confused " why ? "

searching for an answer
begged down on my knees
It's all about love
But I could not justify any of these

When my heart aches
seen her crying
I slowly realised
Gosh she is mine

sometimes now and then
whenever she calls
I hold my breath
to tell her " you are my all "

Joel


keep going nangi ... this is simple but heart touching. My reply won't go with this ... but it will justify a little ... cheers !

 

[Samantha567]

lasssssanai

 

[DiLakshika]

I'M WONDERING ,,HOW THEY (WORDS) CAN EVEN COME TO YOUR MIND!

YOU HAVE A TALENT...

AND I'M ENJOYING IT...

I LOVE EACH AND EVERY WORD IN YOUR POEMS,,,WHICH ARE ONLY WORDS BUT TALK LIKE A WORLD...

I LOVE THE MAGIC YOU ARE USING IN YOUR POEMS...

IT CAN RAW EACH READER'S ATTENTION...

I CAN READ IT SEVERAL TIMES WITHOUT GETTING FED UP...

FIGHT WITH FATE MINU

JUST FIGHT. DNT GIVE UP NEVER
& I KNOW THAT U CAN FIGHT

 

[Meeeharaka]

Ega seethala karawana unusum kawi pada.....

 

[dulhari]

Its very Touching Minu... Its really really nice. all you words are comming true in near future. its wish from me dear nangi..... its beautiful....

 

[Planthis]

...

 

[nwnbs]

දැන් කවි කියවන අය අඩුවෙලා. රසික අය්ය දවසක් කියපු කතාව ඇත්තද කියලත් හිතෙනව...

 

[Planthis]

කියලා වැඩක් නෑ. නුවන් අයියා....

 

[Dinuka888]

I pray for God ,give me one more birth to make you mind forever

wow heart touching wording cuteeee

again a heart touching master piece frm the heart of urs...

wonderfully presented..thouroughly shaken my heart..yu left me speechless agn..don't hav words to say wat i feel to say..

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

well done sis.. nothing to say more than Dil, she made a gr8 comment.. God Bless u!!!

 

[ronsilva]

හදවතේ පතුලෙන්ම බිඳී ආ සිතුවිලි ධාරාවන් මෙලෙස අකුරු කොට අමුනා අපේ සිත් කීරි ගස්සන්නට සමත් පුංචි නිර්මානකාරිනියක් වේද ඒ ඔබම හැර අන් කවරෙක්ද කියල හිතෙන තරමටම මෙය මගේ සිතේ පතුලටම කිඳා බැස්සා..

නංගියා තරම් සිතින් ශක්තිමත් පුංචි කෙල්ලක් මට තවම හමු වෙලා නෑ..

නංගියට ජය..

 

[Planthis]

Where is she?

 

[cspmaxx]

wow...so romantic

mata mathak unaa mama harima asa karana me song eka


you took my heart away

when my whole world was gray

you gave me everything.....and little bit more

and when it's cold at night

and you sleep by my side

you become the meaning of my life

 

[kassaD]

A touching poem minu.you don't need anymore chance. u already had your chance and you living it...Nice heart touching poem! keep write more and more English poems

 

[elaballa]

 

[Doly]

Very Romentinc nangiyo...

Thanks aiye

 

[Doly]

LOVE is a miracle all the time.....
Though it's a such a little word, no one explained it yet. no one can...and no one will...

Love comes with lots of innocent expectations and fragile feelings.....

But here in this poem I believe...
There are no losrs in love..
According to the poem I feel the poet is already succeeded in this miraculous feeling ...

Nice creation Minu nangi...
I cld feel it, smell it....
Weldone.....

thanks alot Missaka aiye