~Make You Mine Forever ......!~

[Rasim]

8/10

try to improve skills

 

[Doly]

We all laugh
we all cry ..
I heard They say
but I was confused " why ? "

searching for an answer
begged down on my knees
It's all about love
But I could not justify any of these

When my heart aches
seen her crying
I slowly realised
Gosh she is mine

sometimes now and then
whenever she calls
I hold my breath
to tell her " you are my all "

Joel


keep going nangi ... this is simple but heart touching. My reply won't go with this ... but it will justify a little ... cheers !

appreciated your words Joel
thanks aLOT

 

[Doly]

lasssssanai

thank you

 

[Doly]

I'M WONDERING ,,HOW THEY (WORDS) CAN EVEN COME TO YOUR MIND!

YOU HAVE A TALENT...

AND I'M ENJOYING IT...

I LOVE EACH AND EVERY WORD IN YOUR POEMS,,,WHICH ARE ONLY WORDS BUT TALK LIKE A WORLD...

I LOVE THE MAGIC YOU ARE USING IN YOUR POEMS...

IT CAN RAW EACH READER'S ATTENTION...

I CAN READ IT SEVERAL TIMES WITHOUT GETTING FED UP...

FIGHT WITH FATE MINU

JUST FIGHT. DNT GIVE UP NEVER
& I KNOW THAT U CAN FIGHT

its my pleasure Akkiyo
thanks alot

 

[Doly]

Ega seethala karawana unusum kawi pada.....

thaNks aiye

 

[Doly]

Its very Touching Minu... Its really really nice. all you words are comming true in near future. its wish from me dear nangi..... its beautiful....

thanks Dul Akkiyo

 

[Doly]

දැන් කවි කියවන අය අඩුවෙලා. රසික අය්ය දවසක් කියපු කතාව ඇත්තද කියලත් හිතෙනව...

ඒක මටත් හිතෙනවා අයියේ...
සමහර අය මෙතැනට රැල්ල වගේ ඇවිත් ආයෙම යනවා.
කවියට ආදරේ අය විතරක් ඉතිරි වෙනවා. ඒක තමා හැමදාම උනේ....

 

[Guybrush Threepwood]

monavada me boru ....... , ada kaale inna kello ekka sira love karanna ba , nikan jeewite vinasa kara ganna tamai venne .

 

[Doly]

monavada me boru ....... , ada kaale inna kello ekka sira love karanna ba , nikan jeewite vinasa kara ganna tamai venne .

Ne magen monawat ahanne natuwa yanna tamunta hari ganiyek hamba une natiunama enawa methana baila gahanna

 

[Guybrush Threepwood]

Ne magen monawat ahanne natuwa yanna tamunta hari ganiyek hamba une natiunama enawa methana baila gahanna

boruvata boruva kiyanne natuva mokoak kiyanna kiyala da kiyanne ? kauda baila gahuve oyada mamada ?

 

[kassaD]

monavada me boru ....... , ada kaale inna kello ekka sira love karanna ba , nikan jeewite vinasa kara ganna tamai venne .

ubala hoda minissu ne. watetama kotana unata itin wate yana un tama set wenne! their is two side in a coin dude mind dat.

 

[Doly]

boruvata boruva kiyanne natuva mokoak kiyanna kiyala da kiyanne ? kauda baila gahuve oyada mamada ?

oya??

mokada mama oyage hitapu oya kiyana ganiyek neme mawath e hodata danna. kollo sudda wenna hadanna epa harida?

balangiyama EK eke enna eka kollekutawath hari haman kellek hamba wela nane

 

[cspmaxx]

Ne magen monawat ahanne natuwa yanna tamunta hari ganiyek hamba une natiunama enawa methana baila gahanna

aiy oyata me dawas wal ochcharama kenthi yanne...oya post karana minnissu hadanne oyawa kenthi gassawala athal ganna.ganan ganna epa moda chuunnn...
oya owata reply karama un thawath up wena ekai wenne

 

[Guybrush Threepwood]

oya??

mokada mama oyage hitapu oya kiyana ganiyek neme mawath e hodata danna. kollo sudda wenna hadanna epa harida?

balangiyama EK eke enna eka kollekutawath hari haman kellek hamba wela nane

ah ehenam oba tumiya kiyanawa vage tamuse kiyala kata karannada kiyanne ? , maha lokuvata adare gana poem liyanawa e unata kata karanne kunuharupen . onna okai boruva kiwwe .

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

ubala hoda minissu ne. watetama kotana unata itin wate yana un tama set wenne! their is two side in a coin dude mind dat.

100% agreed...

 

[Doly]

aiy oyata me dawas wal ochcharama kenthi yanne...oya post karana minnissu hadanne oyawa kenthi gassawala athal ganna.ganan ganna epa moda chuunnn...
oya owata reply karama un thawath up wena ekai wenne

Aiye....Hari vidiyata adare karana kenekta owa kiyaddi kenthi yanawa. mama waradi vidiyata adare karana kenek neme. eka Kasun aiyagen ahanna. karanna puluwan uparima kapakereem karala adare karana kenek mama.

oya balanna methana eka kellek avith kollanta baninawa? una hoda na kiyanawada?

mokada e kollo 100% hodata adare karalada ??

na eth kelleo complain karanne na hama kollama ekama godata dala ekai Aththa

 

[Doly]

ah ehenam oba tumiya kiyanawa vage tamuse kiyala kata karannada kiyanne ? , maha lokuvata adare gana poem liyanawa e unata kata karanne kunuharupen . onna okai boruva kiwwe .

Katha kalayuthu vidiyata katha karala athi.....
hoda kellek hamba wennanam hoda vidiyata adare karala balanna. kello oya kiyana taram pahath thathwaye ennawada kiyala

 

[Guybrush Threepwood]

ubala hoda minissu ne. watetama kotana unata itin wate yana un tama set wenne! their is two side in a coin dude mind dat.

mama metana kaatawat paudgalikawa banne na machn , kunuharupa kiyanna taram pahat kenekut neme . adare gana mage adahasa kiwwe vitarai , mata EK eke gihin ona thread ekaka comment karanna aithiyak thiyenavane . Eth me mrudu vidiyata poem liyana ekkena mata PM karala kunuharupen banala thiyenava , kellekuta hariyanne nati kata vadak eka .

 

[m3pium]

Nice poem Nangiyoo..
Last 4 lines ar realy toching..
U have good talent...Keep it Nangiyo
Wish u all the best!!!

 

[Doly]

mama metana kaatawat paudgalikawa banne na machn , kunuharupa kiyanna taram pahat kenekut neme . adare gana mage adahasa kiwwe vitarai , mata EK eke gihin ona thread ekaka comment karanna aithiyak thiyenavane . Eth me mrudu vidiyata poem liyana ekkena mata PM karala kunuharupen banala thiyenava , kellekuta hariyanne nati kata vadak eka .

Kunu harupa ??

sure da?

mama a pm eka methana dannada??