My 50th Poem...... ( Maname Kumari.....)

dulhari

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ඔන්න මගෙනුත් උණු උණු සුබ පැතුම්...සාර්ථක ඉදිරි ගමනකට...!!!
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හැමදාමත් වගේ ලස්සන නිර්මාණයක්...

godak isthuthi and ane sorry mata oyage namath metion karanna bari una list eka oyath hama dama mawa dirimath kala comment karala
 

coolnishan

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    පළමුවෙන්ම සුබ පතනවා අක්කි 50 වෙනි නිර්මාණය දක්වා ආ ගමන් මගට.ඉදිරියටත් ලස්සන නිර්මාණ කරන්නට අවශ්ය ශක්තිය ලැබෙන්න කියල්ලා පතනවා.. මේ නිර්මාණයත් ගොඩක් ලස්සනයි. ;)
     

    dulhari

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    පළමුවෙන්ම සුබ පතනවා අක්කි 50 වෙනි නිර්මාණය දක්වා ආ ගමන් මගට.ඉදිරියටත් ලස්සන නිර්මාණ කරන්නට අවශ්ය ශක්තිය ලැබෙන්න කියල්ලා පතනවා.. මේ නිර්මාණයත් ගොඩක් ලස්සනයි. ;)

    thank you nishan malli
     

    chintha4u

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    Nice try Dul. But still I don't think you can justify her. Even in ur poem there are point that shows selfishness of her.

    If you want to justify her u have to write a new Maname. Just editing and modifying won't do that. It was the on of worst of her kind.

    Anyway Congratz sis.... It's great to have someone like u who can see things in a different way .

    Keep up ur good work....
     
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    dulhari

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    Nice try Dul. But still I don't think you can justify her. Even in ur poem there are point that shows selfishness of her.

    If you want to justify her u have to write a new Maname. Just editing and modifying won't do that. It was the on of worst of her kind.

    Anyway Congratz sis.... It's great to have someone like u who can see things in a different way .

    Keep up ur good work....

    thank you very much chintha for encouraging me....

    i don't wan't to justify her this are thought which i felt in her roll. thanks again
     

    archirasika

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    සුදු මැණිකේ ළඟ.....
    hmmm...what to say....so great.... i love this drama from school time and specially its songs like "preemayen mana ranjitha we"

    nicely readressed the real issue of princess... i personaaly belive that the princess is reasonable for such extent.

    congradulations for your 50th poem and specially thank you verymuch for given friendship and care for me... aa thanks for the book also....

    be with us for ever...:D
     

    archirasika

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    සුදු මැණිකේ ළඟ.....
    hmmm...what to say....so great.... i love this drama from school time and specially its songs like "preemayen mana ranjitha we" ;)

    nicely readdressed the real issue of princess... i personally believe that the princess is reasonable for such extent.:yes:

    congratulations for your 50th poem and specially thank you very much for given friendship and care for me... aa thanks for the book also....

    be with us for ever...:D