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ronsilva

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ගැ‍හැ‍ණි‍ය‍ක්‍ ම‍හ‍ මෙ‍ර‍ ව‍ගේ‍ නො‍සෙ‍ල්‍වී‍ සි‍ටි‍ය‍ යු‍තු‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍ක්‍.. (ම‍ගේ‍ අ‍ම්‍ම‍ගෙ‍න්‍ ඇ‍ගේ‍ ජි‍වි‍ත‍ය‍ පු‍රා‍ ම‍ම‍ දැ‍ක්‍ක සැ‍බෑ‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍)

අ‍ද‍ ද‍ව‍සේ‍ කු‍ඩා‍ පැ‍ල‍ය‍ක්‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ සි‍ත‍ තු‍ල‍ රෝ‍ප‍න‍ය‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍න්නා‍ ශක්‍ති‍ය‍ හා‍ අ‍භි‍යෝ‍ග‍ය‍න්‍ට කෙ‍ලි‍න්‍ම‍ මු‍හු‍න‍ දී‍මේ‍ ශක්‍යතා‍ව‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ ම‍තු‍ දි‍න‍යේ‍ අ‍ම්‍මා‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍කු‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍පා‍ බි‍ම‍ ද‍මන්න කො‍හෙ‍ත්‍ම‍ බැ‍රි‍ ම‍හා‍ වි‍ස‍ල්‍ රු‍ක්‍ෂය‍ක්‍ බ‍ව‍ට‍ ඔ‍බ‍ව‍ ප‍රි‍පු‍ර්ණ ක‍ර‍නු‍ ල‍බ‍න්නේ‍...

නං‍ගි‍ය‍ගේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍ණය‍ සා‍ර්ථක නි‍ස‍යි‍ මෙ‍ච්‍ච‍ර‍ ක‍තා‍ ක‍ලේ‍...
 

Dinuka888

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The poem express your feeling and pain clearly
Its a very touching poem,
really you have the magic of writing that your each and every poem becomes the mirror which reflects your heart and its pain truly


comeon cutee
move ahead in your life
I want to read your poem having the feeling of joy next time
However, as a poem, liked the careful choice of words used to depict your feelings and its rhythm in most places


 

j2l

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loku aruthak katikarapu padha peli keepayak neda ?.... lassana kathawak sangawapu kawya nirmanayak .. lassanai , eth arthaya gaththama dukai
 

Doly

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Ane mada nangi baba…meka dakkama oya nam kiyai “just a poem” kiyala…eth mata hitenne oya negative pattata hitanawa kiyala….
Nangi baba issara wage nahane dan itn..:no:
Kaviya nam itin lassanai, eth terumata mama kamathi naha….:(

mama me wenakamma possitive vidiyata hithuwane aiye. danuth negative hithanneth na. mokada mage wate enna hamoma mata ehema hitannawath mawa watennewath denne na. meka attatama kaviyak vitarai. kenekta duka hitata awama hodata liyanna puluwan. sathuta athule hangila thiyena duka ekka lassana kavi liyanna puluwan. me a wage kaviyak :)
 

archirasika

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සුදු මැණිකේ ළඟ.....
mama me wenakamma possitive vidiyata hithuwane aiye. danuth negative hithanneth na. mokada mage wate enna hamoma mata ehema hitannawath mawa watennewath denne na. meka attatama kaviyak vitarai. kenekta duka hitata awama hodata liyanna puluwan. sathuta athule hangila thiyena duka ekka lassana kavi liyanna puluwan. me a wage kaviyak :)

hm...ehemanam kamak naha....:D
 
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Ane mada nangi baba…meka dakkama oya nam kiyai “just a poem” kiyala…eth mata hitenne oya negative pattata hitanawa kiyala….
Nangi baba issara wage nahane dan itn..:no:
Kaviya nam itin lassanai, eth terumata mama kamathi naha….:(
100% bro.. she is not like b4...:(:(