බෝඩිමේ දවස…….bodime Dawasa….

[archirasika]

බෝඩිමේ දවස…….bodime Dawasa….

 

[Ashawari]

hoda nirmanayak, katawak kiyewwa wage, wiwida pudgalayo ekama tanaka hitan mona mona de karanawada...............

apuru pada galapimak.......

 

[twisted]

hmm i think with different characters and their habits you are trying to say how different ppl who represent different aspects of society deal with lifes and it's issues...they are seeking their own peace of mind in their own ways wrong they might be ..and those ways are in terms with their best conveniece ..good poetry bro ..you wrote a good one.

 

[archirasika]

hoda nirmanayak, katawak kiyewwa wage, wiwida pudgalayo ekama tanaka hitan mona mona de karanawada...............

apuru pada galapimak.......

thanks sister, that was the my very idea...

 

[elaballa]

lassana wadak

 

[DiLakshika]

අම්මෝ...........

හිත දිව්වේ කැම්පස් එකේ හොස්ටල් එකට
මන්ද මට අමු අමුවේ මැවී පෙනුනා මේ ඔක්කොම.....
හැමදාම වගේ උපරිමයක් .......

 

[blacktarzan]

අපුරැයි
අර සරම නම් කියලා හරි හොදවන්න වෙයි
තව නිර්මාණ බිහිකරන්න ශක්තිය ලැබේවා
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[Heroz]

hyyyyyyyyyyyyooooooo

 

[Planthis]

කියන්න වචනත් නෑ...උපරිමයි......
නියෙමටම නියමයි රසික අයියා....

 

[Mindada hee sara..]

අති සාර්ථක නිර්මාණයක් රසික..

මුල් පදයේ සිටම බොරුව, රැවටීම, ඉඡ්ඡා භංගත්වය, සමාජ පරිහාණිය, දුප්පත් කම, තරගය, අප බොහෝ දෙනෙකුගේ ජීවිතයේ ඇති හිස් බව වගේ කාරණා රාශියක් ඔයා ඉස්මතු කරනවා...

අප හා බෙදා හදා ගත්තට ස්තූතියි...

 

[dulhari]

mama ahala thiyanawa bodin jeewithe kiyanne rasawath katuka athdakeemak kiyala. meka kiyawaddith ehema hithuna... apuruwata wachana karalaa ayyie chithrayak wage mawenawa kiyawaddi

 

[Meeeharaka]

Pattama patta aiye kawiya..
Ettatama Bodima mewila penawa..................

 

[nwnbs]

උපරිමයි අයියා... එළකිරි...

 

[urajdrlk]

Nice work Rasika Aiya......

 

[Asoka Hemantha]

hmm i think with different characters and their habits you are trying to say how different ppl who represent different aspects of society deal with lifes and it's issues...they are seeking their own peace of mind in their own ways wrong they might be ..and those ways are in terms with their best conveniece ..good poetry bro ..you wrote a good one.

he he.. twisted u hv described whole d things (twi u are good at it), so nice poem/job Rasika brother from u, keep it up!!!

 

[chriela]

 

[Aravindawaduge]

ela kiri macho...

 

[kassaD]

hik okkoma attanam hita ganna puluwan bodim life eka! nice poem

 

[archirasika]

hmm i think with different characters and their habits you are trying to say how different ppl who represent different aspects of society deal with lifes and it's issues...they are seeking their own peace of mind in their own ways wrong they might be ..and those ways are in terms with their best conveniece ..good poetry bro ..you wrote a good one.

100% correct brother...thanks a lot....

 

[twisted]

he he.. twisted u hv described whole d things (twi u are good at it), so nice poem/job Rasika brother from u, keep it up!!!

oh thank you

100% correct brother...thanks a lot....

you are welcome